Kindly fix grammatical errors

CG, was the "pieces of humans" in contract to the word "peace" intentional? I'm not sure what you mean by "pieces of humans" - so if you could be a little more clear on that, I can help with the rest.

by saying pieces of humans i am hinting towards voilence and roits taking place in many part of the world in the name of religion. and ya i wrote it intentionaly as it is have same sound like peace or is it appropriate to say piece of humanity please help

I think "pieces of humans" is just too vivid - it sounds like you are referring specifically to things like explosions that literally tear the people apart.

You have to help me see the connection between the politicians and the tragedies that take place in the name of religion.

Our hearts yearn for the peace that is alleged to be the goal of religion, but instead of peace, too o

Here is the full poen it's a creative writing which i am attempting to do so accordingly i wrote the lasy sentence but I think what you suggested is right

Democracy is Buy the people Far the people Off the people Our politicians are experts in earning Name, fame but without shame Indeed our citizens don’t believe to cast the vote but vote the caste Our heart says ‘peace of society’ to pre

Well, as you probably know, with poetry the rules don't have to apply. You already seem to have a sense of this because you have used no puntuation at all.

Were you making another deliberate pun with "Buy the people" instead of "By the people"? (For the people, Of the people.)

The only part that just makes no sense is "against invoked"