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The table displays how many people visited Ashdown museum in the year prior to and year following refurbishment.The pie chart illustrate the details regarding satisfaction level of individuals who have come on the same year.
Overall, it is evident that there was a significant increase in the number of tourist after its renovation. In addition, the review of the sightseers were outstanding after the refurbishment.
Looking at the table in detail, 74,000 people visited the museum prior to restoration, and it elevated to 92,000 after restructuring. A rapid rise of 18,000 individuals was evident. With regards to the satisfaction level before rebuilding 15% were very satisfied, and it doubled when it come satisfied one. 40% completely got dissatisfied and around 5% of people have not given their response. But the following year after renovation, 40% of individuals remained satisfied, and 35% were very satisfied.Eventually the dissatisfied reduced to 15%. However, visitors who haven't responded remained the same in both year.
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