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Tinsky06 Posted 17 years ago
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Kindly correct this writings

hi guys, could you please read this and check it for me.

thank you so much!

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I had this strange dream, I don't remember exactly when it started but I guess a month ago till now it keeps coming back, sometimes when I close my eyes at night to sleep I saw this dream. Let me tell you what's on my dream, there is only one thing in common, I always run fast as I can, running away from something or lets say someone, I was exhausted.. tired.. afraid.. It seems I want to escape for something, but the question is what I am running for? or who am i running for? Place? Every dream there is different place, sometimes in the woods, subdivision, in the highway and etc. Sometimes it is raining so hard and I'm running barefoot. Sometimes I run by myself or someone is after me. This is what I remembered but every dream has different story, I just don't remember exactly the whole story. The first three times I saw it in my dream, for me it was mysterious, it bothered me badly I looked for answers and tried to find the meaning of my dream, but I lost my interest so I stopped. 'Coz those times every time I woke up I felt terrible. But days passes by I still dreamed about it and for me "it's only a dream, just a dream", it no longer bother me. I can't wait to move to Dallas, it's my plan since last year and I'm still here in Montebello living with my parents. I'm looking forward to move this coming May. This is what I always wanted for since I graduated high school to move out. Last night, again I saw this dream and my curiosity came back. At this very moment I'm thinking that my dream and longing to move to Dallas are relevant to each other. It is not the fact that I will move out this coming May, I think it's one of my reason why I want to. I don't know.. I don't read dreams, or it might be just coincident that I dreamed again and suddenly I felt the excitement and longing to move to Dallas. I heard that dreams are connected to our reality life, it might mean something. Maybe a part of my past, presently happening, or I'm going to face in future.
  

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Tinsky: A few suggestions. tinsky06 I am having had this strange dream, I don't remember exactly when it started , but I guess a month ago . Up ' till now it keeps coming back, sometimes when I close my eyes at night to sleep , I see saw this dream.

  • Tinsky: A few suggestions.
  • tinsky06 I am having had this strange dream, I don't remember exactly when it started , but I guess a month ago .
  • Up ' till now it keeps coming back, sometimes when I close my eyes at night to sleep , I see saw this dream.
  • Let me tell you what's in my dream .
  • T here is only one thing in common .
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Tinsky:
A few suggestions.
tinsky06I am having had this strange dream, I don't remember exactly when it started, but I guess a month ago. Up 'till now it keeps coming back, sometimes when I close my eyes at night to sleep, I see saw this dream. Let me tell you what's in my dream. There is on
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Thank you for taking time to read this and correct some of errors, but I have few questions and ask for simple explanation.

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It happen in the past in dream why should I use the present tense.

until I am was exhausted.. tired.. afraid..

- This two words have same meaning, right?

relevant related

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tinsky06- It happen in the past in dream why should I use the present tense.
It is your choice to use present or past tense, but you should be consistent. You can describe a dream in present tense, because it is like telling a story as if you are there when it happens, or you are remembering it. You started the sentence in the present tense - I run
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Nice explanation, now I understand.

Thank you very much for your help. Emotion: smile

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