Kindly Correct these statements

Please Correct the following statements

"After my secondary school education, I gained admission into Yaba College of Technology for a two-year Ordinary National Diploma in Electrical/Electronics Engineering. Studying Electrical/Electronics Engineering has exposed me to a full range of engineering courses all of which have positively influenced and reinforced my intense interest in engineering. I have also studied some subjects in the humanities and they have both been enjoyable and enlightening."

"I would now like to further my studies to the Master's Degree level as this will enable me achieve my career goals in life. I am particularly interested in Information Technology as this is the area I believe I can make the greatest contributions, utilizing my theoretical background and creativity."

I look forward to your reply.

Thanks