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Iris_es Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Kindly correct my sentences
Hi Teachers,
Kindly correct my sentences below if there's any mistake..
In 2005, Thomas, a tomato farmer, ordered 50 kg of tomato seed from the same seed sellers he had been doing business for years. The seeds arrived with invoices which included a clause (term) excluding all liability for any loss or damage, and limiting the sellers’ liability to an obligation to replace the seed or repay the purchase price, which in this case was $600. The tomato seeds were planted and proved to be the wrong type which was poisonous. Thomas incurred a loss of $20,000. Thomas is contemplating legal action against the seed sellers.
Thanks.
Iris
Kindly correct my sentences below if there's any mistake..
In 2005, Thomas, a tomato farmer, ordered 50 kg of tomato seed from the same seed sellers he had been doing business for years. The seeds arrived with invoices which included a clause (term) excluding all liability for any loss or damage, and limiting the sellers’ liability to an obligation to replace the seed or repay the purchase price, which in this case was $600. The tomato seeds were planted and proved to be the wrong type which was poisonous. Thomas incurred a loss of $20,000. Thomas is contemplating legal action against the seed sellers.
Thanks.
Iris
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In 2005, Thomas, a tomato farmer, ordered 50 kg of tomato seed from the same seed sellers he had been doing business with for years. The seeds arrived with invoices which included a clause (term) excluding all liability for any loss or damage, and limiting the sellers’ liability to an obligation to replace the seed or repay the purchase price, which in this case was $600. The tomato seeds were planted and proved to be the wrong type which , comma was poisonous.
- In 2005, Thomas, a tomato farmer, ordered 50 kg of tomato seed from the same seed sellers he had been doing business with for years.
- The seeds arrived with invoices which included a clause (term) excluding all liability for any loss or damage, and limiting the sellers’ liability to an obligation to replace the seed or repay the purchase price, which in this case was $600.
- The tomato seeds were planted and proved to be the wrong type which , comma was poisonous.
- Thomas incurred a loss of $20,000.
- He is contemplating legal action against the seed sellers.
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In 2005, Thomas, a tomato farmer, ordered 50 kg of tomato seed from the same seed sellers he had been doing business with for years. The seeds arrived with invoices which included a clause (term) excluding all liability for any loss or damage, and limiting the sellers’ liability to an obligation to replace the seed or repay the purchase price, which in th
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I agree with the addition of with.
The tomato seeds were planted and proved to be the wrong type, which was poisonous. (If you want to be very formal, being in fact poisonous)
As this is a legal topic I w
The tomato seeds were planted and proved to be the wrong type, which was poisonous. (If you want to be very formal, being in fact poisonous)
As this is a legal topic I w
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