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Shafi Rehma Posted 12 years ago

Kindly correct my poems

Colors of disbelief
Can I feel the agony of doubts
Intertwined within myself?
Rusted heart and bizarre emotions
Do they need a rest?
The unanswered questions
of belief and virtue
Can they find meaning
when light turns red,
and signal is to stop?
Where I want freedom of thought
not strange flow of emotions
The way they move
like tides striking the shore.
Meaningless, distasteful are they
and turn the tide red.
It isn’t redness of blood
but a color of disbelief
travelling through waves.
  

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Room after room I hunt through the house I hear nothing! She flees, where? 1 -Now rose by rose, I prepare the leaves - I lost my hopes -Where are you?

— Haddoune

  • Room after room I hunt through the house I hear nothing!
  • She flees, where?
  • 1 -Now rose by rose, I prepare the leaves - I lost my hopes -Where are you?
  • 2 -She thinks I am leaving the house, -She thinks that no man can take her, -All the same where ever I had the chance, 3 -In the next room, I heard voices!!
  • - Slowly who is there?!!
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Room after room
I hunt through the house
I hear nothing!
She flees, where?
1
-Now rose by rose, I prepare the leaves
- I lost my hopes
-Where are you?
2
-She thinks I am leaving the house,
-She thinks that no man can take her,
-All the same where ever I had the chance,
3
-In the next room, I heard voices!!
- Slowly who is there?!!

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