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Shafi Rehma Posted 12 years ago
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Kindly correct my poem
My way
I sleep at night
to find peace
within me.
Distant stars
shine without rest
They are million
Of course,
Not alone in their way
Chasing footsteps
Never gone astray.
Here I am
walking on
my way.
Going astray,
I know.
Cos, I want to shine
But I am not a star
Bestowed upon with
Compassionate heart.
This is my life
My way.
I sleep at night
to find peace
within me.
Distant stars
shine without rest
They are million
Of course,
Not alone in their way
Chasing footsteps
Never gone astray.
Here I am
walking on
my way.
Going astray,
I know.
Cos, I want to shine
But I am not a star
Bestowed upon with
Compassionate heart.
This is my life
My way.
Top answer
Peacefully I sleep within myself, as distant stars shine without rest. They are millions, and while I chase dreams, they never go astray. I shine, tho I am not a star, bestowed with a compassionate heart.
- Peacefully I sleep within myself, as distant stars shine without rest.
- They are millions, and while I chase dreams, they never go astray.
- I shine, tho I am not a star, bestowed with a compassionate heart.
- Yet here I am, wandering in circles, whirling through life on my way.
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Peacefully I sleep within myself, as distant stars shine without rest.
They are millions, and while I chase dreams, they never go astray.
I shine, tho I am not a star, bestowed with a compassionate heart.
Yet here I am, wandering in circles, whirling through life on my way.
They are millions, and while I chase dreams, they never go astray.
I shine, tho I am not a star, bestowed with a compassionate heart.
Yet here I am, wandering in circles, whirling through life on my way.
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