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Shafi Rehma Posted 12 years ago
KIndly correct my poem
Voices
These haunted voices
and slow whispers,
echos in my head.
Adrift are they
But have some traits shared
And leads me
To act and
Blossoms me into love.
For I don’t know
Why they fuse?
Isn’t it my consciousness?
Awaken in darks
Restless, tired
And busy in work
And let me sleep
To dream the worlds
I want to go
And never come.
These haunted voices
and slow whispers,
echos in my head.
Adrift are they
But have some traits shared
And leads me
To act and
Blossoms me into love.
For I don’t know
Why they fuse?
Isn’t it my consciousness?
Awaken in darks
Restless, tired
And busy in work
And let me sleep
To dream the worlds
I want to go
And never come.
Top answer
` We cannot 'correct' it. This means you think that there is something wrong with it. If we alter it in any way, it will no longer be your poem.
- ` We cannot 'correct' it.
- This means you think that there is something wrong with it.
- If we alter it in any way, it will no longer be your poem.
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We cannot 'correct' it. This means you think that there is something wrong with it.
If we alter it in any way, it will no longer be your poem.
We cannot 'correct' it. This means you think that there is something wrong with it.
If we alter it in any way, it will no longer be your poem.
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By 'correct' it means that i am a student and learner at the beginning of his learning quest. No one is perfect in this world and we all have flaws in ourselves. Yes, i openly admit that whatever i write it should have errors within it and i will need a teacher to fix it. I don't want to alter the meaning of my poem but to proofread it by someone who is much better than me in this field so my writ
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