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Shafi Rehma Posted 12 years ago

Kindly correct my poem

Poem
Stretching myself;
To find lost words
I kept and should keep in,
Oceans of heart deep.
Seasons have changed,
The winds don’t feel same.
Yes, it felt cold, not colder
Cos, winter has been just a name.
The summer has come again
Buried words behind the pain
I’ll find them in calmness
In between my silence.
  

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Stretching myself to find lost words I kept and should keep in the heart's deep oceans. Seasons have changed, the winds don’t feel same. Yes, it felt cold, not colder: winter has been just a name, and summer has come again.

— Mister Micawber

  • Stretching myself to find lost words I kept and should keep in the heart's deep oceans.
  • Seasons have changed, the winds don’t feel same.
  • Yes, it felt cold, not colder: winter has been just a name, and summer has come again.
  • Buried words behind the pain: I’ll find them in calmness between my silences.
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Stretching myself
to find lost words
I kept and should keep
in the heart's deep oceans.
Seasons have changed,
the winds don’t feel same.
Yes, it felt cold, not colder:
winter has been just a name,
and summer has come again.
Buried words behind the pain:
I’ll find them in calmness
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