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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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After more than two hundred years of British rule, India finally won back its freedom on the 15th of August, 1947. All the patriotic hearts rejoiced at seeing India becoming a sovereign nation and the triumph of hundreds and thousands of martyred souls. It was a birth of a new nation and a new beginning.

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Celebrate the free spirit of India and share the pride of being a part of such a glorious nation.

Keep Sparkling!!

REGARDS,

JASMEET SINGH
  

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After more than two hundred years of British rule, India finally won back its freedom on the 15 th of August, 1947. All our patriotic hearts rejoiced at seeing the triumph of hundreds of thousands of martyred souls and India becoming a sovereign nation. It was a new beginning and the birth of a new nation.

  • After more than two hundred years of British rule, India finally won back its freedom on the 15 th of August, 1947.
  • All our patriotic hearts rejoiced at seeing the triumph of hundreds of thousands of martyred souls and India becoming a sovereign nation.
  • It was a new beginning and the birth of a new nation.
  • (See my edit of this deleted paragraph in your other post) Celebrate the free spirit of India and share the pride of being a part of our glorious nation.
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After more than two hundred years of British rule, India finally won back its freedom on the 15th of August, 1947. All our patriotic hearts rejoiced at seeing the triumph of hundreds of thousands of martyred souls and India becoming a sovereign nation. It was a new beginning and the birth of a new nation.
(See my edit of this deleted paragr
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