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Iris_es Posted 17 years ago
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Kindly correct my email
Please correctly my email if necessary.
"Dear Jane,
Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with Evaluation CD to you today. This piece of mail will be delivered to the mail box of your address as follows:
Ms. Jane Ng
R&D Executive
Teflon Sdn. Bhd.
Free Industrial Zone Phase 5
Bayan Township, 11000 Penang
MALAYSIA
The estimated delivery time is 4-6 working days. Please contact us to confirm that you have received the package.
Should you have any enquires or need any assistance, please feel free to contact us."
Thank you for your help.
"Dear Jane,
Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with Evaluation CD to you today. This piece of mail will be delivered to the mail box of your address as follows:
Ms. Jane Ng
R&D Executive
Teflon Sdn. Bhd.
Free Industrial Zone Phase 5
Bayan Township, 11000 Penang
MALAYSIA
The estimated delivery time is 4-6 working days. Please contact us to confirm that you have received the package.
Should you have any enquires or need any assistance, please feel free to contact us."
Thank you for your help.
Top answer
Minor corrections only. Try: "Dear Jane, Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia. We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today.
- Minor corrections only.
- Try: "Dear Jane, Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
- We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today.
- They will be delivered to the address as follows: Ms.
- Jane Ng R&D Executive Teflon Sdn.
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Minor corrections only. Try:
"Dear Jane,
Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today. They will be delivered to the address as follows:
Ms. Jane Ng
R&D Executive
Teflon Sdn. Bhd.
Free Industrial Zone Phase 5
Bayan Township,
"Dear Jane,
Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today. They will be delivered to the address as follows:
Ms. Jane Ng
R&D Executive
Teflon Sdn. Bhd.
Free Industrial Zone Phase 5
Bayan Township,
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Thanks but the part you corrected was needed because some companies presume that I'll use courier service (personally deliver to the receipient) but I am intending to us normal mailing service (with stamps) hence I need to mention 'send to your mail box' in the email.
Please let me know if there are other errors.
Please let me know if there are other errors.
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Ok, then just write:
"Dear Jane,
Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today. They have been delivered to the following address by normal mail post:
Ms. Jane Ng
R&D Executive
Teflon Sdn. Bhd.
Free Industrial Zone Phase 5
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"Dear Jane,
Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia.
We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today. They have been delivered to the following address by normal mail post:
Ms. Jane Ng
R&D Executive
Teflon Sdn. Bhd.
Free Industrial Zone Phase 5
Ba
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