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Shanawaz Mohammed Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Kindly chk my cover letter & correct it. Thks for your time & consideration

0Kindly do corrections for my COver letter.02br
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00With reference to the advertisement on 01i01u00website address02u02i01u00 02u00for position for 01i01u00the topic of interest/ topic advertisement topic02u00,02i00 I am writing in a hope that you might be able to offer me the same. I would be happy to join in your research group02br
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00I am a Bachelor in Biochemistry (1999-2002) from Periyar Univeristy and Masters in Biochemistry (2002-2004) from 01b00the02b00 University of Madras with a strong inclination 01b00towards 02b00research in Neurobiology. Having gained a strong theoretical background in Basics of neurobiology during my academic years, I 01b00would like02b00 to explore further by doing a doctoral program in your research wing.02br
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00 A very good theoretical knowledge from my present job and practical experience gained in National Institute of Mental Health and Neurosciences, NIMHANS, Bangalore will help me pursue this doctoral degree. Being proficient in academics I am 01b00also02b00 a "people person" who mingles well with others. I have been an amicable person both in my academic and corporate environment. 02br
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00With a good academic background and strong interpersonal skills I firmly believe if I being accepted for this program I would put my maximum efforts 01b00into striving02b00 for excellence.02br
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00Please review my CV for other value adding courses and other information.02br
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00Thanks for your time and consideration. Looking forward for your reply.02br
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00Sincerely 0-
  

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02br 02br 00 A very good theoretical knowledge from my present job and practical experience gained in 01i 00National Institute of Mental02i 00 01i 00Health 02i 00and 01i 00Neurosciences, NIMHANS02i 00, Bangalore will help me pursue this docto01font 00rate 02font 00degree. Being proficient in academics I am also a "people person01font 00"(I haven't heard of this before)02font 00 who mingles well with others. I have been an amicable person both in my academic and corporate environment.

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  • 02br 02br 00 A very good theoretical knowledge from my present job and practical experience gained in 01i 00National Institute of Mental02i 00 01i 00Health 02i 00and 01i 00Neurosciences, NIMHANS02i 00, Bangalore will help me pursue this docto01font 00rate 02font 00degree.
  • Being proficient in academics I am also a "people person01font 00"(I haven't heard of this before)02font 00 who mingles well with others.
  • I have been an amicable person both in my academic and corporate environment.
  • Thanks for your time and consideration.
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1font00(You can't start a letter like this.Say something like dear sir/madam)02font00 With reference to the advertisement on 01i01u00website address02u02i01u00 02u00for 01font00the 02font00position 01del00for02del00 01font
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0 Dear Doll02br
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00I am heartly thanking you for your valuable suggestions for my cover letter. I do corrections in cover letter and post it again. Kindly chekc the same and suggest me if I am wrong02br
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00yours sincerely02br
00Shanawaz Mohammed0-
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0 I just tried to find grammatical mistakes but I am not an expert on writing. I don't know the international letter format. It is better if someone else helps you. As for the 01i00people person02i00 it is better to say 01i00affable 02i00or01i00 easy-going.02i00 0-
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0 01font001) Thanks for your time and consideration. 02br
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0Hi, 02br
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00I am a new member, was going through various notes posted and spotted yours, probbly this is too late, but you can say I am a peoples' person - who enjoys working with and for people or something like that 02br
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00Hope you received a poitive responce for your letter 0-
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0 01font00but you can say I am a peoples' person 02font02br
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00Sorry, but I woudn't recommend a phrase, which could not be found within a dictionary like Longman, Dictonary of Contemporary English or Cambridge Advanced Learner's Dictionary. Longman/Cambridge only refer a 01font00man/woman of the people
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0 Dear Kathrin and Doll02br
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00Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions for my cover letter. I have reframed this cover letter as a formal letter than the previous one. Kindly check and suggest me if I am wrong.02br
00Thank you so much!02br
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0 Hi,02br
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00well done! I must say you have been learning fast. If you are writing within Europe CV is the right world, otherwise use resume. I wish you the good luck and will keep the fingers crossed.02br
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0 Dear Kathrin02br
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00I am very glad for your speedy response. As I am applying for European countries I use the word CV. Also I need your valuable advice and suugestions for my Statement of purpose too, which I am posting in Englush forum very shortly.02br
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00Thanks a Lot!!0-
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