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0 I boarded a train from Mumbai heading towards Pune. I got the companions in the group of businessmen sitting next to me. They were discussing the future of politics in the country, debating about the results of forthcoming general elections. One said, the congress will grab the large chuck of middle class votes as they presented the populist budget this financial year won everyone’s heart. Other men instantly shot the words like rocket, he was of opine that all this is just a perception, that Government serious thinks about the middle class and poor of the country. Progress in only restricted to urban, so many farmers are committing suicides everyday, millions are still below poverty line, millions still go to bed without eating, millions struggle with their lives living with $2 per day. Other person nodded agreeing to his views. By the rime train chugs at the station, I really liked their conversations how time passed me I didn’t released, I reached my destiny, I disembarked from the train thinking they were politicians or businessmen 0-
  

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0 I boarded a train from Mumbai heading towards Pune. I got the companions in the group of businessmen sitting next to me. They were discussing the future of politics in the country, debating about the results of forthcoming general elections.

  • 0 I boarded a train from Mumbai heading towards Pune.
  • I got the companions in the group of businessmen sitting next to me.
  • They were discussing the future of politics in the country, debating about the results of forthcoming general elections.
  • One said, the congress will grab the large chuck of middle class votes as they presented the populist budget this financial year won everyone’s heart.
  • Other men instantly shot the words like rocket, he was of opine that all this is just a perception, that Government serious thinks about the middle class and poor of the country.
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0 I boarded a train from Mumbai heading towards Pune. I got the companions in the group of businessmen sitting next to me. They were discussing the future of politics in the country, debating about the results of forthcoming general elections. One said, the congress will grab the large chuck of middle class votes as they presented the populist budget this financial year won everyone’s heart. Oth
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0Well, here is my shot at your story. I split it up into separate sentences to make it easier to work on. My comments and suggestions are in square brackets under each of your original sentences.02br
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00I boarded a train from Mumbai heading towards Pune.02br
00[Strictly speaking "a" is correct here but it is far more common for native speakers to say "I boarde
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00I boarded a train from Mumbai heading towards Pune. My companions were the group of businessmen sitting next to me. They were discussing the future of politics in the country, debating the results of the forthcoming general elections. One said the Congress will grab the largest chunk of middle-class votes, as the populist budget they presenetd this financial y
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0 Thanks a lot dear for such a analyses and by the way that is not 'rime', it's 'time', it was silly typing mistake and I am sorry about that, unnecessarily it made your grey cell working over it. 0-
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0 Thanks Clive the line with you highlighted there I meant to say 00. I hadn't released the time was passing so quickly, but i putted in poetry manner is that doesn't convince the meaning 00 0-
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1span00but i01font00 putted02font00 in poetry manner 01font00is that doesn't convince [??] 02font00the meaning02span0-
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0 I want that line to be in idiomatic phrase 0-
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0 Fine, work at it. 0-
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0Hi,02br
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00I hadn't01b01u00 realized02u02b02br
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00Clive 050010id1
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0 realized is US English or UK English 0-

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