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Bugs bunny Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Kindly check my writing

You have been working in a company for the last two years. Recently, your computer in the office has started giving some problems and it is affecting your work performance.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,

  • describe the problem
  • explain how it is affecting your work
  • write what you want him to do regarding it.

Sir,

I am Mr John who is one of the employees of your company. Through this letter, I am bringing you a notice that my office’s computer is showing some problems and needs to repair it.

Since last week, my computer is not functioning well. It freezes when it is used for more than an hour and some letters in the key broad are not responding well which makes it difficult to type words. All these affect my performance negatively as it takes more time to complete a task that should not have taken such a lengthy time. Moreover, it demotivates me as well.

Therefore, I request you to kindly sent a technician and fix the problem. I hope that you would act upon it as soon as you read this letter. Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely,

John

  

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Sir,

[ 1] Dear Mr Stone,

I am Mr John who is one of the employees of your company. Through this letter, I am bringing you a notice that my I am writing to you about my office’s computer,

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