0
Creativeguru Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Kindly check my sentences
Diamond Ids presents Shooting Stars Collection
Shooting Stars Collection presented by Diamond Ids
Diamond Ids’ shooting stars collection
Kindly let me know which is the best line for the headline and if there is any other way to write, kindly suggest
Shooting Stars Collection presented by Diamond Ids
Diamond Ids’ shooting stars collection
Kindly let me know which is the best line for the headline and if there is any other way to write, kindly suggest
Top answer
Hi Creativeguru They're all OK -- except that you forgot the capitalization in the third one. In addition, the third one seems more appropriate as a title rather than as a headline. The second one would also work as a heading or title.
- Hi Creativeguru They're all OK -- except that you forgot the capitalization in the third one.
- In addition, the third one seems more appropriate as a title rather than as a headline.
- The second one would also work as a heading or title.
- The first one strikes me as the most "headline-ish".
- You could add the word "the" in the first two.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
Hi Creativeguru
They're all OK -- except that you forgot the capitalization in the third one. In addition, the third one seems more appropriate as a title rather than as a headline. The second one would also work as a heading or title. The first one strikes me as the most "headline-ish".
You could add the word "the" in the first two.
They're all OK -- except that you forgot the capitalization in the third one. In addition, the third one seems more appropriate as a title rather than as a headline. The second one would also work as a heading or title. The first one strikes me as the most "headline-ish".
You could add the word "the" in the first two.
CreativeguruDiamond I
0
Related Questions