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Creativeguru Posted 17 years ago
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Kindly check my paragraph for writing style

Excellence is not our business, it’s our tradition
Guest is god, we firmly believe in it, that’s why we treat every guest as if they are divine and ensure our meticulously arranged banquet meets all your requirements – as you step in, you are greeted with a heavenly aroma of pure delight. The whole staff is committed to making your event as perfect as you wish it to be that’s why our team undoubtedly go the extra mile to ensure a successful event for you.
  

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Using '***/***' is a dangerous practice. Excellence is not our business, it's our tradition. The guest is King.

  • Using '***/***' is a dangerous practice.
  • Excellence is not our business, it's our tradition.
  • The guest is King.
  • That's why we treat every guest like royalty .
  • We ensure that our meticulously- prepared banquets meet all your requirements .
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Using '***/***' is a dangerous practice.

Excellence is not our business, it's our tradition.

The guest is King. That's why we treat every guest like royalty. We ensure that our meticulously-prepared banquets meet all your requirements. As you enter the hall, you are greeted with a heavenly aroma of pure del
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CreativeguruGuest is ***
Usually its not right to translate the "sayings" of some other language into English. The words lose their real meanings. When spoken in Hindi, it sounds perfectly fine; but that's not the case when you translate it to English.

You see, MM wrote King instead of ***.
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I fully agree with you soeleen thanks a lot for your valuable suggestion to you and MM

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