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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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0 00There are two countries within one; 010200 and Bharat. In 010200 rich are getting richer, while in Bharat poor are suffering. The richer class income has increased drastically led to increase in consumption, which in turn is affecting supply-demand ratio. Demand is more, but supply is less. On the contrary, in Bharat people’s income didn’t increased but the basic commodities price has skyrocketed. So poorer getting still poor and there condition are getting worse from bad. Is this we call booming economy?00 00 0-
  

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*71*0 01p 01span 00There are two countries within 01b 00the02b 00 one01b 00:02b 00 India and Bharat. In India01b 00,02b 00 01b 00the02b 00 rich are getting 01b 00more02b 00 richer, while in Bharat the poor are suffering. 01b 00The income of the richer class has02b 00 increased drastically 01b 00over the past few years leading to02b 00 01b 00a02b 00 increase in 01b 00the02b 00 consumption, which in turn is affecting supply-demand ratio.

— Jackson6612

  • *71*0 01p 01span 00There are two countries within 01b 00the02b 00 one01b 00:02b 00 India and Bharat.
  • In India01b 00,02b 00 01b 00the02b 00 rich are getting 01b 00more02b 00 richer, while in Bharat the poor are suffering.
  • 01b 00The income of the richer class has02b 00 increased drastically 01b 00over the past few years leading to02b 00 01b 00a02b 00 increase in 01b 00the02b 00 consumption, which in turn is affecting supply-demand ratio.
  • Demand is more, but 01b 00the02b 00 supply is less.
  • 01b 00Conversely/On the contrary02b 00, in 01b 00Bharat the income02b 00 didn’t 01b 00increase02b 00 01b 00but/although the price of basic commodities02b 00 has skyrocketed.
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01span00There are two countries within 01b00the02b00 one01b00:02b00 India and Bharat. In India01b00,02b00 01b00the02b00 rich are getting 01b00more02b00 richer, while in Bharat the poor are suffering. 01b00The income of th

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1span00There are two countries 01del00with02del00in one; India and Bharat. In India 01font00the 02font00rich are getting richer, while in Bharat 01font00the 02font00poor are suffering. The 01font00income of the 02fo
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0Thanks Optilang for your kind help and it seem today you weren't on train 050010id1
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01cite10Creativeguru12cite10Thanks Optilang for your kind help and it seem11b10s12b10 today you weren't on train12blockquote
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1span00There are two countries within one; 010200 and Bharat. In 010200 rich are getting richer, while in Bharat poor 02span01span00are becoming even poorer02span01span00 00suffering00. The richer
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0Thanks Parry, but one thing i would like you to clarify for me is it ok to delete the 'article' like for instance..In India (the)rich are getting richer, while in Bharat (the)poor 00are becoming even poorer00 suffering....which in turn is affecting (the)supply-demand ratio.02br
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0In India THE rich are getting/becoming richer02br
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00In India rich PEOPLE are getting/becoming richer02br
00You cannot have In India, rich are getting ............. 0-
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0Thanks Optilang now I understood it perfectly0-
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The Branch Manager’s remarks at previous page may please be seen. It is ascertained from administration & P.R. wing at Head office tokens are issued to the staffs on a monthly basis for consumption of coffee/tea form a particular vendor, who in turn submits the tokens for payment for the coffee/tea supplied. Similarly, at branches the tea/coffee supplier claims the amount on a monthly basis

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