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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Kindly check my para writing!!

0Dr. Rajesh Talwar who was arrested on Friday for allegedly killing his 14-year-old daughter and domestic help will be seeking bail today.02br
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00His lawyer had filed two applications in the court. First, stating that Dr. Rajesh Talwar is asthma patient so he needs proper medical treatment. Second, is for bail, since the Police do not have any prima facie evidence against him.02br
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00On the other hand even the police had moved the court for seeking Dr. Rajesh custody. All the applications will come up for hearing today at a Noida court.02br
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00It would be interesting to see what stand court will take today. Although the police is saying that Dr. Rajesh is the prime suspect but they are lacking evidence for the same. 02br
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01b00Kindly check for grammar errors and please tell me how much you will rate me on the scale of 10 points for my writing style but with honestly02b00 0-
  

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0Hi CG,02br 02br 00Dr. 02br 02br 00His lawyer had filed two applications in the court. 01b 01font 00The first stated 02font 02b 00that Dr.

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  • 0Hi CG,02br 02br 00Dr.
  • 02br 02br 00His lawyer had filed two applications in the court.
  • 01b 01font 00The first stated 02font 02b 00that Dr.
  • Rajesh Talwar is 01b 01font 00an 02font 02b 00asthma patient 01b 01font 00and thus 02font 02b 00needs proper medical treatment.
  • 01b 01font 00The second application 02font 02b 00is for bail, since the 01b 01font 00p02font 02b 00olice do not have any prima facie evidence against him.
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0Hi CG,02br
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00Dr. Rajesh Talwar01b01font00,02font02b00 who was arrested on Friday for allegedly killing his 14-year-old daughter and domestic help01b01font00,02font02b00 will be seeking bail today.02br
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0Thanks GG. Please clarify the following02br
00Dr. Rajesh Talwar01b00,02b00 who was arrested on Friday for allegedly killing his 14-year-old daughter and 01i01u00domestic help02u02i01b00,02b00 will be seeking bail today.>>>( do we to write a domestic help)02br
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01. domestic help can be replaced by domestic 'helper'0-
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0You can replace it with "housekeeper" or "cleaning woman" or whatever this person did. As written, it could have been gardnerer, the cook, whatever.0-
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0I wonder what 'para writing' means. Is it like paralegal paperwork?02br
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0I assumed it was simply "paragraph" but perhaps it was "paraphrasing" - ask CG.0-
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0So Creativeguru, are you a paralegal or did you mean 'paraphrasing' or 'paragraph'? [A]05002br
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0I mean Paragragh from next time I won't use the abbrevation here 050010id1
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0Ah, I see. I was just wondering. Please don't take it too seriously.05000 Keep using abbreviations if you like. 05102br
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0come on! I didnt took the way you thinking. I think its better to use full form because it will avoid my friends time by strolling in wonderland. 050010id1
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