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Creativeguru Posted 11 years ago
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Kindly check my para regarding old age
Loneliness is a very real problem, as contemporaries die and families move, who understands this better than the old age people, who are thrown out of their homes, eventually by the same people for whom they have built it, after lifelong hard work.
But indeed with the elders’ blessing we can move forward to the real happy community. We are doing our bit for such old age people by operating Sahwaas, an old age home.
At Sahwaas, we take care all needs of every family member and provide them the comfort of the happy home, isn’t that is our traditional?
Thanks
But indeed with the elders’ blessing we can move forward to the real happy community. We are doing our bit for such old age people by operating Sahwaas, an old age home.
At Sahwaas, we take care all needs of every family member and provide them the comfort of the happy home, isn’t that is our traditional?
Thanks
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Loneliness is a very real problem, (no comma) as contemporaries die and families move, (comma splice) who understands this better than the elderly old age people , who are thrown out of their home s , eventually by the same people for whom they have built it , after lifelong hard work. But indeed with the elders’ blessing we can move forward to the a real happy community. We are doing our bit for such old age people by operating Sahwaas, an old age home.
- Loneliness is a very real problem, (no comma) as contemporaries die and families move, (comma splice) who understands this better than the elderly old age people , who are thrown out of their home s , eventually by the same people for whom they have built it , after lifelong hard work.
- But indeed with the elders’ blessing we can move forward to the a real happy community.
- We are doing our bit for such old age people by operating Sahwaas, an old age home.
- At Sahwaas, we take care of all needs of every family member and provide them the comfort of a happy home, (comma splice) isn’t that is our traditional ?
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Loneliness is a very real problem, (no comma) as contemporaries die and families move, (comma splice) who understands this better than the elderly old age people, who are thrown out of their homes, eventually by the same people for whom they have built it, after lifelong hard work.
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But indeed with the e
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