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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Kindly check my para on IPL

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00Cricket is no more a sports, it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in 010200) coffer has been overflowing, so where to put the money? Comes the idea from Mr Lalit Modi’s brain, let’s make the rich player even richer. It marked the arrival of ‘Indian Premier League’. Politicians, film stars instantly queued up to grab the larger chunk of the BCCI cash pie. 00The Indian cricket crazy fans are really crazy they leave their work and get hooked to TV sets to see the matches. Players are earning money at the cost of crazy fans lost working hours.0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02br 02i 02br 02br 02br 00Indian01b 00 02b 01u 00premier league02u 00 02br 02br 00Cricket is no more 01u 00a sports,02u 00 it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in India) coffer has been overflowing, so where to put the money? 01u 00Comes the idea02u 00 from Mr Lalit 01u 00Modi’s brain,02u 00 let’s make the rich player even richer.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02br 02i 02br 02br 02br 00Indian01b 00 02b 01u 00premier league02u 00 02br 02br 00Cricket is no more 01u 00a sports,02u 00 it’s a business.
  • The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in India) coffer has been overflowing, so where to put the money?
  • 01u 00Comes the idea02u 00 from Mr Lalit 01u 00Modi’s brain,02u 00 let’s make the rich player even richer.
  • 01u 00It marked02u 00 the arrival 01u 00of ‘Indian02u 00 Premier League’.
  • 01u 00Politicians, film stars02u 00 instantly queued up to grab the larger chunk of the BCCI cash pie.
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01i00I have underlined some problem areas:02br
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00Indian01b00 02b01u00premier league02u00 02br
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00Cricket is no more 01u00a sports,02u00 it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in India) coffer has been
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0Thanks you sir for underlining the problem areas, it's a best way to improve upon the grammar. I had reworked on the underlined sentences kindly check the following02br
00Indian01b00 02b00Premier League 00Cricket is no more a sport, it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in 010200) coffer has been overflo
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0Kindly anyone help me with this0-

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