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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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00 Being women we know exactly what make up a good kitchen. What all utensils, appliances should in the kitchen. Also, we want a well organized, everything should be in its place, spacious drawers and cabins, . We committed to providing the best kitchen in terms of utility, design and style that refines your cooking experience and redefine your lifestyle. After all only a woman understands a woman’s needs. 00 0-
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00 Being women we know exactly what make up a good kitchen. What all utensils, appliances should in the kitchen. Also, we want a well organized, everything should be in its place, spacious drawers and cabins, . We committed to providing the best kitchen in terms of utility, design and style that refines your cooking experience and redefine your lifestyle. After all only a woman understands a woman’s needs. 00 0-
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0 . 02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Being 01 u 00 women we 02 u 00 know exactly what 01 u 00 make 02 u 00 up a good kitchen. 01 u 00 What all utensils, appliances 02 u 00 should in the kitchen.
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- 02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Being 01 u 00 women we 02 u 00 know exactly what 01 u 00 make 02 u 00 up a good kitchen.
- 01 u 00 What all utensils, appliances 02 u 00 should in the kitchen.
- Also, we want 01 u 00 a well organized, everything 02 u 00 should be in its place, spacious drawers and 01 u 00 cabins, 02 u 00 .
- 01 u 00 We committed 02 u 00 to providing the best kitchen in terms of utility, design and style that 01 u 00 refines 02 u 00 your cooking experience and 01 u 00 redefine 02 u 00 your lifestyle.
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00 Being 01 u 00 women we 02 u 00 know exactly what 01 u 00 make 02 u 00 up a good kitchen. 01 u 00 What all utensils, appliances 02 u 00 should in the kitchen. Also, we want 01 u 00 a well organized, everything 02 u 00
01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas: 02 i 02 br
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00 Being 01 u 00 women we 02 u 00 know exactly what 01 u 00 make 02 u 00 up a good kitchen. 01 u 00 What all utensils, appliances 02 u 00 should in the kitchen. Also, we want 01 u 00 a well organized, everything 02 u 00
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0 Kindly check I rephrased it 02 br
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00 Being women, we know exactly what makes a good kitchen, and what all the utensils and appliances should be. Our kitchens are well organized; everything is in its place, and cabinets and drawers are spacious. We are committed to providing the best kitchen in terms of utility, design and style to refine your cooking experien
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00 Being women, we know exactly what makes a good kitchen, and what all the utensils and appliances should be. Our kitchens are well organized; everything is in its place, and cabinets and drawers are spacious. We are committed to providing the best kitchen in terms of utility, design and style to refine your cooking experien
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0 Your grammar is okay. 02 br
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00 I think you will annoy a lot of your potential customers by referring repeatedly to the kitchen as a woman's domain. I will not redefine my lifestyle because I suddently have more drawer space than I did. The kitchen does not define me. 02 br
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00 Understanding a woman's needs sounds more like the bedroom than the kitchen,
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00 I think you will annoy a lot of your potential customers by referring repeatedly to the kitchen as a woman's domain. I will not redefine my lifestyle because I suddently have more drawer space than I did. The kitchen does not define me. 02 br
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00 Understanding a woman's needs sounds more like the bedroom than the kitchen,
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0 00 Thanks a lot Grammar Geek indeed its our class project where I have to promote the modular kitchen and our guide told us that no one knows kitchen better than a woman. Indeed same though what you had mentioned popped up in my mind also but I just ignored and worked on the content. But now I will definitely put forward these points in front of class. Indeed today's woman no longer wants a
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0 CG, by way of apology, let me offer you an alternative approach. 02 br
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00 What about recognzing that women today have a lot going on. Between their jobs at the office, and driving their kids arounds, and doing their part to keep the house in order, the last thing they need is a cramped, disorganized kitchen that makes their life harder. Designed by women who know what it's
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00 What about recognzing that women today have a lot going on. Between their jobs at the office, and driving their kids arounds, and doing their part to keep the house in order, the last thing they need is a cramped, disorganized kitchen that makes their life harder. Designed by women who know what it's
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0 00 That's a beautiful concept and straight towards the target audience, and that is the right way to promote such products modular kitchens and all. Thanks for sharing such a powerful concept and please there is nothing for apologizing so strict instruction(a small request) don’t use such words ever! 00 0-
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