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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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A and B are trading partners and have longstanding, mutual & commercial relationship, which facilitates "A" to purchase, produce & ship goods and the "B" markets them, in such a manner which both deals and works for their customers.


I request you to kindly check and advice me


With Kind regards


Sandeeprajay
  

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Anonymous A and B are trading partners and who have a longstanding, mutual (here, do you mean mutual friendship? If not, mutual isn't needed because a relationship, by nature, is mutual. So, you would just write, "A & B are trading partners and have a longstanding commercial relationship) & commercial relationship, which facilitates "A" to purchase, produce & ship goods, and the "B" to market s them, in such a manner which so that both deal s with and works for their customers.

— Sam1947

  • Anonymous A and B are trading partners and who have a longstanding, mutual (here, do you mean mutual friendship?
  • If not, mutual isn't needed because a relationship, by nature, is mutual.
  • So, you would just write, "A & B are trading partners and have a longstanding commercial relationship) & commercial relationship, which facilitates "A" to purchase, produce & ship goods, and the "B" to market s them, in such a manner which so that both deal s with and works for their customers.
  • [ If you do mean that they have both a mutual personal friendship, as well as a business relationship, you could say, "A and B are trading partners and have a longstanding mutual friendship and commercial relationship, etc.
  • I would remove the comma and change the which that follows relationship to that.
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Anonymous A and B are trading partners and who have a longstanding, mutual (here, do you mean mutual friendship? If not, mutual isn't needed because a relationship, by nature, is mutual. So, you would just write, "A & B are trading partners and have a longstanding commercial relationship) & commercial relationship, which facilitates "A"
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