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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Kindly asking help for motivation letter

I need help with my motivation letter. Since my native language is not English, there is a change my letter will be full of mistakes.
I would be extremely thankful if anyone can give me useful feedback.

Dear Mr X,
It is with great enthusiasm that I submit my application for the undergraduate course X at the University of X.

My choice for this study comes from my immense fascination for identifying human remains by determining the unique features of a decedent from the skeleton. To give the unrecognizable their identity back and return the vanished and forgotten to their loved ones. To discern humanity and remind us of why we are all here, because we treasure human life.
Moreover will the knowledge of Biology, Science and Culture to the legal process establish the facts, which will lead to the truth.

I have read scientific publications, books and documentaries about this, but the course Physical Anthropology by Barge Anthropology in Amsterdam (AMC) really strengthened my passion and knowledge about this field. I concluded this from the catecholamine neurotransmitters of the biogenic amines I received everyday on my way to the course and my tenacity to achieve the purpose.
My curiosity gives me an enquiring mind and a remarkable desire to learn, which is important in the scientific field. Furthermore, as an analytical, logical and rational thinker, I am able to make logical decisions and see cases from multiple perspectives.
Additionally, I believe interpersonal communication is pragmatic to improve the accomplishment of multi-disciplinary research. My work experience and extended language skills have strongly increased my communication skills.

The undergraduate course X at the University of X provides a scientific basic the first two year. I am positive it will make me better understand the evolutional, physiological, anatomical and chemical aspects of the human body and it would be a more useful way if I were to have a cultural background. Besides that, is the connection to CAHID also a benefit. Nevertheless studying abroad is an incredible opportunity to experience a new culture, new language and it could have a positive effect on my personality.
This undergraduate course would be an excellent start to build my career and secure a position in the X field.

Finally, I hope I succeeded in making clear that I am thrilled at the possibility of studying X and I would love the opportunity to meet you and discuss the value that I can bring to this field. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
  

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  • Here are some suggestions: Dear Mr X, It is with great enthusiasm that I submit my application for the undergraduate course X at the University of X.
  • ) My choice for this study comes from my immense fascination for identifying human remains by determining the unique features of a decedent from the skeleton.
  • To give the unrecognizable their identity back and return the vanished and forgotten to their loved ones.
  • ) T o discern humanity and remind us of why we are all here, because we treasure human life.
  • ) Moreover will the knowledge of Biology, Science and Culture to the legal process establish the facts, which will lead to the truth.
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Here are some suggestions:

Dear Mr X,
It is with great enthusiasm that I submit my application for the undergraduate course X at the University of X. (Is your application for one class - a course - or an undergraduate degree programme?)

My choice for this study comes from my immense fascination for identifying human remains by determining the unique features of a deced

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