Kindly advise
I need to write an email to our Human Resource Dept. to arrange necessary to transfer one employee Internally (From one department to another department).
Please advise if the below sentence would be OK especially the ending sentence (Please arrange the necessary) or advise a suitable sentence it it's place.
"The subject referred staff need to be transferred from Dept1 to Dept2 effective 10th February 2019
Please arrange the necessary"
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lvp2478 Please advise if the below sentence below would be OK It does not conform to my rules of good business communication: Messages must be: 1. Direct but polite 2. Clear and succinct 3.
- lvp2478 Please advise if the below sentence below would be OK It does not conform to my rules of good business communication: Messages must be: 1.
- Direct but polite 2.
- Clear and succinct 3.
- Respectful of the other party 4.
- ) need (ungrammatical) to be transferred from Dept1 to Dept2 effective 10 th February 2019 Fixed.
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lvp2478Please advise if thebelowsentence below would be OK
It does not conform to my rules of good business communication:
Messages must be:
1. Direct but polite
2. Clear and succinct
3. Respectful of the other party
4. grammatical
"The subject referred staff (
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