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TinaMr Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Keywords

Hello.

I'll be very grateful if you could reply quickly, as I'm just about to send my resume out and trying to finalize it. I´m not sure, they´re correct. Besides, I can´t decide, which one - "performing" or "processing" fits better?

They´re the keywords on the first page of my resume.

  • Excellent team-player, as well as able to work independently in a timely and effective manner
  • Performing/processing highly challenging tasks through strong organizational and prioritization skills, with high commitment and excellent time management skills
  • Finding effective solutions through strategic thinking and strong analytical skills.
  

Top answer

We perform tasks. We do not process tasks; we process data or information. The wording is overall rather inelegant.

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  • We perform tasks.
  • We do not process tasks; we process data or information.
  • The wording is overall rather inelegant.
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  • Finding effective solutions through strong analytical skills
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We perform tasks. We do not process tasks; we process data or information.

The wording is overall rather inelegant. e.g. Finding effective solutions through strong analytical skills

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TinaMrThey´re the bullet points on the first page of my resume.

I am equally capable and efficient in a team setting as being an individual contributor.
My sense of commitment, paired with a strong skill set, mean that the most challenging tasks are completed on time without sacrificing quality.
I seek pragmatic

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TinaMrI'll I'd (I would) be very grateful if you could ...

This is a formula of politeness, and it always starts with I'd or I would, not with I'll or I will.

CJ

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