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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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The below is a description for a hotel-room key which can store payment information like a credit card.
Could you please check if the following sounds natural? I am not sure about the part "you are requested to pay."
This card-key is only valid for the term you have paid for. If you extend your stay, you are requested to pay again and have your card-key updated.
Could you please check if the following sounds natural? I am not sure about the part "you are requested to pay."
This card-key is only valid for the term you have paid for. If you extend your stay, you are requested to pay again and have your card-key updated.
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" It's grammatical, but I think it's unnecessary. Isn't it obvious that if you stay in a hotel longer, you'll have to pay more? This card-key is only valid for the term you have paid for.
- " It's grammatical, but I think it's unnecessary.
- Isn't it obvious that if you stay in a hotel longer, you'll have to pay more?
- This card-key is only valid for the term you have paid for.
- If you extend your stay, you'll need to have it updated.
- CJ
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moguwai007I am not sure about the part "you are requested to pay."It's grammatical, but I think it's unnecessary. Isn't it obvious that if you stay in a hotel longer, you'll have to pay more?
This card-key is only valid for the term you have paid for. If you extend your stay, you'll need to have it updated.
CJ
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