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Nikitus Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Kevin walks down the street, with his wooden amulet

Hello.

Is the following grammatically correct?

"Kevin walks down the street, with his wooden amulet around the neck his eyes closed and holding a box of chocolate sticks wrapped in a light brown paper and yellow bow."

Thanks.
  

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I would write it this way.

Kevin walks down the street with his wooden amulet around the neck and his eyes closed, holding a box of chocolate sticks wrapped in light brown paper and tied with a yellow bow."

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