Kevin walks down the street, with his wooden amulet
Hello.
Is the following grammatically correct?
"Kevin walks down the street, with his wooden amulet around the neck his eyes closed and holding a box of chocolate sticks wrapped in a light brown paper and yellow bow."
Thanks.
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Kevin walks down the street with his wooden amulet around the neck and his eyes closed, holding a box of chocolate sticks wrapped in light brown paper and tied with a yellow bow."