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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Kevin opened the door of his old room

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Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"Kevin opened the door of his old room. He turned on the radio, placed a CD, and pushed the repeat button to listen his “special” song over and over again. He seemed to be lost in space and time at his parent's house.

He taked off his close leaving his shirt on the floor, the pants and jacket in the chair. He taked out an old red shirt and black sports pants from the closet.

-“Where are my sneakers?”. he asked to himself

Kevin began seeking desperately between his shoes and clothes. He seeked under the bed and found nothing. He was becoming very anxious. Kevin looked at the bathroom but still nothing.

-"Where are my damn sneakers?" He asked, angrily this time.

He taked a deep breath and went to the kitchen. Kevin struck accidentally something with his feet.

-"I found them! YES!", Kevin said.


Thanks!

  

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"Kevin opened the door of his old room. He turned on the radio, placed a CD in the player , and pushed the repeat button to listen his “special” song over and over again. ) He seemed to be lost in space and time at his parent's house.

  • "Kevin opened the door of his old room.
  • He turned on the radio, placed a CD in the player , and pushed the repeat button to listen his “special” song over and over again.
  • ) He seemed to be lost in space and time at his parent's house.
  • He took off his clothes leaving his shirt on the floor, the pants and jacket in the chair.
  • He took out an old red shirt and black sports pants from the closet.
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"Kevin opened the door of his old room. He turned on the radio, placed a CD in the player, and pushed the repeat button to listen his “special” song over and over again. (If both the radio and CD were on, wouldn't that be annoying?) He seemed to be lost in space and time at his parent's house.

He took off his clothes leaving his shirt on the floor, the pants

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