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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Kelly arrived at her apartment really upset

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"Kelly arrived at her apartment really upset. The boxes with used clothes that were on the floor . The lady from the apartment upstairs complains about the noise using her cane. Kelly took a big wooden stick and hit the ceiling and starts to yell.


-"COME ON MISS DOWLING. DID I MAKE A SCENE WHEN YOU AN ARGUMENT WITH YOUR HUSBAND? AND THAT HAPPEN ALMOST EVERY DAY!"


Thanks.

  

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No. "Kelly arrived at her apartment really upset. OK The boxes with used clothes that were on the floor .

  • No.
  • "Kelly arrived at her apartment really upset.
  • OK The boxes with used clothes that were on the floor .
  • Fragment, incomplete sentence.
  • The lady from the apartment upstairs complains about the noise by striking her cane on the floor .
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No.

"Kelly arrived at her apartment really upset. OK

The boxes with used clothes that were on the floor . Fragment, incomplete sentence.

The lady from the apartment upstairs complains about the noise by striking her cane on the floor. (Present tense. It does not match the narrative.)

Kelly took a big wooden stick and hit the ceiling and s

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