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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Kelly and Amanda walked down the streets in the middle of the night

Hello.


Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"Kelly and Amanda walked down the streets in the middle of the night in direction where Kelly parked her car."

  

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Nikitus Kelly and Amanda walked down the streets in the middle of the night in direction toward where Kelly (had) parked her car. The grammar is OK as shown above; however, it gives the impression that you are trying to pack too much information into one sentence. CJ

— CalifJim

  • Nikitus Kelly and Amanda walked down the streets in the middle of the night in direction toward where Kelly (had) parked her car.
  • The grammar is OK as shown above; however, it gives the impression that you are trying to pack too much information into one sentence.
  • CJ
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NikitusKelly and Amanda walked down the streets in the middle of the night in direction toward where Kelly (had) parked her car.

The grammar is OK as shown above; however, it gives the impression that you are trying to pack too much information into one sentence.

CJ

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