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Keep or keeps

what is the right word - keep or keeps??

Addressing disruptive behavior through restorative ‘circles’ — which keep children in their learning environment, reduces suspensions, and creates a safe school culture.

  

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If you use a dash, you are leaving the reader to try to figure out what you mean. Does 'which' refer to 'circles'? Or does 'which' refer to the whole gerund phrase, ie Addressing disruptive behavior through restorative ‘circles’?

  • If you use a dash, you are leaving the reader to try to figure out what you mean.
  • Does 'which' refer to 'circles'?
  • Or does 'which' refer to the whole gerund phrase, ie Addressing disruptive behavior through restorative ‘circles’?
  • I'd remove the dash.
  • If you want 'which' to refer to 'circles', rely on plural tenses and say eg Addressing disruptive behavior through restorative ‘circles’, which keep children in their learning environment, reduce suspensions, and create a safe school culture.
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If you use a dash, you are leaving the reader to try to figure out what you mean. Does 'which' refer to 'circles'? Or does 'which' refer to the whole gerund phrase, ie Addressing disruptive behavior through restorative ‘circles’?

I'd remove the dash.

If you want 'which' to refer to 'circles', rely on plural tenses and say

eg Addressing disruptive behavior through restorativ

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Both are possible, but "keep(s) ... reduce(s) ... create(s)" has to be consistent. With "keep ... reduce ... create", "which" is understood to refer to "restorative 'circles'". With "keeps ... reduces ... creates", "which" is understood to refer to "addressing disruptive behaviour ...". For me, the former

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