Könnte jemand bitte Korrektur lesen? Das wäre sooo lieb!!! :) (noch heute?)

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00Ich wäre Euch so sehr verbunden, wenn jemand Korrektur lesen könnte und mich bitte verbessern würde. Das wäre verdammt lieb! Problem an der Sache, ich bräuchte es relativ schnell :-S heut noch? 02br
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00Why do men give up too soon?02br
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00Hardly it gets obscure to men, they sit down again and wait for a clear sight or turn round 02br
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00straight away 'cuz they don't want to spend/waste time. As one gets older one experienced a lot, met many people, at all ages and provenance. Every friendship or relationship leaves its marks, every experience has its effects, every disappointment its scars; you grow older, you learn from it, you get more damageable/vulnerable, more anxious, and more and more closed-up. But everytime again it comes to the point when you open up yourself again. You meet this one person, which at one go seems so extraordinary. He knows full well how to make it and before you can say knife, you're up to your neck in it again. Actually you already fear what will probably happen again soon, but it's already too late. He already casted a spell over you, and yeah HE is tooootally different than all those other guys...but who of them is actually right then?! Oh well...anyways....he loves you right away since the first day y'all met and promises everything under the sun to you and when he finally got it that you believe in him........it goes BOOM! and the dream's over. You wake up and realize you're alone again and ask yourself how long does it take before all your heart's blood is shed. And everytime a piece of your soul dies. Didn't you also make him aware of it?! He did promise it would be different with him.............................and then ONCE AGAIN he was just one of them 01b00sigh02b02br
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00How do you make out "Mr.Rght"? How often do you close your door too soon even if there might not be a reason for it? What does he have to do so that you would let him in?02br
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00I'm telling you...02br
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00...I want a man who does not chicken out at the smallest controversy, who sticks by his word, who does not let other instances influence himself and who stands up for the things he believes in. A man that is responsible and man enough so that you can lean on him, who is strong enough to guide and protect you and mature enough to show/smoothes you the way, but yet someone that can admit his deficiencies. I want the one that thinks that I'm still pretty without make-up, in my sweatshirt and baggy pants, 'cuz he sees ME. I want the guy who will text me every single morning and tell me good morning and every single night to tell me sweet dreams; the guy who doesnt mess with other girls cuz he knows he has me, the guy who will text me and tell me "i love you and you make me smile" just because; the guy who will blindfold me and take me to the beach, let me run my toes through the sand and then makes me guess where we are. the guy who will hold me when I'm crying and wipe away my tears; the guy who won't pressure me to do things I dont want to, the guy who kisses me on the forehead; the guy who won't lie to me about where he's going or where he's been or who he's been with; the guy who'll randomly tickle me just to hear me giggle; the guy who actually listens to me when I talk cuz he really cares; the guy who's excited all day because he's looking forward to our date that night; the guy who is content to just be able to hold me and wants nothing more; the guy who can't help but smile when I walk into the room; the guy who'll say i love you first because he's not afraid to say it; the guy who's perfectly content with staying in and watching movies and cuddling; the guy who gets butterflies when he hears my name; the guy who's not afraid to tell his friends he loves me; the guy who doesn't care about my imperfections and loves me more for them; the guy who will hold me while we watch the sunset; the guy that makes me laugh when I'm down, makes me happy when I'm mad, and makes me smile when I'm frowning; the guy that isn't afraid to eat ice cream with me when I'm having a bad day; the guy who will show up at my house with soup and a movie when I'm not feeling well; the guy who isnt always tryin to act like a hard ass around me; the guy that will come pick me up at 3 am when he has to be up at 8; the guy that tells me the right thing to do or how he really feels, not just what I want to hear. I want the guy that loves me for me and not what his friends think of me; the guy that will love me even when I do something so retarded that he normally wouldn't want to be seen with me; the guy that is always loyal no matter what. I want real love, which is strong enough to weather out the biggest storm. The man that comes up with something really special to ask me if I want to become his wife; the man who thinks of my b-day in advance and who really worries about how to rejoice me by doing something and who does just run by a flower shop on valetines day on his way back home because he missed it. A man which does also love my family and considers them one day as his, because they'll accept him as a part of the family as well. I want the man who makes clear the sense of life, discovers the whole world with me, a good sport. A man, who is my partner, best friend, lover all at the same time. I want the guy who really wants to make me the happiest girl in the world. 05002br
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