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Peaceblinkfriend Posted 17 years ago
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"...juvenile offenders especially" ?

Hi all

Reintegrative shaming is an appropriate punishment option for juvenile offenders especially.


Would you say it doesn't read naturally with 'especially' ending the sentence? I am also not sure if I have expressed what I wanted to imply. I want to imply that although reintegrative shaming can be an appropriate punishment option for all types of offenders, it is especially appropriate for juvenile offenders.

Thank you

PBF
  

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I think especially is fine at the end, but you could also do this: Reintegrative shaming is an appropriate punishment option , especially for juvenile offenders . It is a good thing to remember that communicative writers usually do not want to imply (= express or state indirectly) ; they want to express clearly and directly .

  • I think especially is fine at the end, but you could also do this: Reintegrative shaming is an appropriate punishment option , especially for juvenile offenders .
  • It is a good thing to remember that communicative writers usually do not want to imply (= express or state indirectly) ; they want to express clearly and directly .
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I think especially is fine at the end, but you could also do this:

Reintegrative shaming is an appropriate punishment option, especially for juvenile offenders.

It is a good thing to remember that communicative writers usually do not want to imply (= express or state indirectly) ; they want to express clearly and directly.
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Thank you for your reply, MM.Emotion: smile

I agree with what you've said. I should express myself clearly and directly instead of implyi

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