Justification writing
Hi, can anyone help to look on my writing as below? Because it sound not good for me.
’No fuel transaction was made for BFM & BGP in Jun ‘18.Generally, these vehicles was idled due to no event that required these type of vehicles.For the month of July, these vehicles were in operation.Therefore, the fuel usage was increased from Jun to Jul.’
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’ There were no fuel transactions for BFM & BGP in June 2018. These vehicles were idled because there were no events that required them. For the month of July, they were in operation so fuel was used.
- ’ There were no fuel transactions for BFM & BGP in June 2018.
- These vehicles were idled because there were no events that required them.
- For the month of July, they were in operation so fuel was used.
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’No fuel transaction was made for BFM & BGP in Jun ‘18.Generally, these vehicles was idled due to no event that required these type of vehicles.For the month of July, these vehicles were in operation.Therefore, the fuel usage was increased from Jun to Jul.’
There were no fuel transactions for BFM & BGP in June 2018. These vehicles were idled because there were no events that required
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