Justice System

I would appreciate it if someone could proofread this paragraph in response to my friend's post.

I agree with you that justice system is a huge problem that impacts all aspects of our lives, especially the sentencing time length. There are a lot of circumstances where black offenders received longer sentencing time than white offenders. There are unreasonable shootings of white police officer towards black, innocent people. The camera solution may be a good idea but realistically, I don’t think not many people are willing to pay tax just to afford these cameras because they believe the percentage of incidents involving unfair justice not quite often. I agree with you that it is very hard to change the mindset of people, and one way we can remedy the problem is to emphasize the social justice problem more in education. We should look at the crime committed and the outcomes of people ’s actions to determine the punishments since no matter what color skin we have, we are all human. Furthermore, everyone should be encouraged to raise voices and continue fighting for equality. Media and events can be great in conveying the idea of racial fairness.I hope the system would finally realize their wrongs and attempt to do something to ensure an equal treatment is given to every citizen, regardless of their color.