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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
just two sentences
I'm not sure if I'm writing in a right section. Anyway, please check these two sentences. ANy suggestions and correction of awkard phrases is welcome! It's very important to me.
The world we live in is to love. Admiring it’s constant flux and infinite variety serves as an inexhaustible source of strength while overcoming any obstacle.
Thank You!
Kristina
The world we live in is to love. Admiring it’s constant flux and infinite variety serves as an inexhaustible source of strength while overcoming any obstacle.
Thank You!
Kristina
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We should love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety . It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle.
- We should love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety .
- It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle.
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We should love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety. It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle.
We should love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety. It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle.
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Thank you for correcting this, but by saying "the world we live in is to love" I tried to paraphrase "I love the world we live in" so should I still change it into "we should love the world we live in"?
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No, change it to what you tried to say in the first place:
I love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety. It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle.
No, change it to what you tried to say in the first place:
I love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety. It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle.
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