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Lifeengineer Posted 19 years ago
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Hi everybody
It would be wonderful if some one could correct this sentence and try to give me one better, thanks very much for your time:

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Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most and which day and at what time will you visit us to show our presentation and discuss the projects. (the visit will be at an exhibition)
  

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Hi, It would be wonderful if some one could correct this sentence and try to give me one better, Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most and which day and at what time will you visit us to show our presentation and discuss the projects. (the visit will be at an exhibition) Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most. When are you planning to visit us to see our presentation and discuss these projects?

— Clive

  • Hi, It would be wonderful if some one could correct this sentence and try to give me one better, Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most and which day and at what time will you visit us to show our presentation and discuss the projects.
  • (the visit will be at an exhibition) Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most.
  • When are you planning to visit us to see our presentation and discuss these projects?
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

It would be wonderful if some one could correct this sentence and try to give me one better,

Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most and which day and at what time will you visit us to show our presentation and discuss the projects. (the visit will be at an exhibition)

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Hi, thaks a lot for your comment, I changed this sentence please do me a favor and fix it, thanks in advance and have a good day:

Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most and when are you planning to visit us in order to see our presentation and discuss these projects with our experts and engineers.
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Hi,

Please indicate to us which projects interest you the most and when are you planning to visit us in order to see our presentation and discuss these projects with our experts and engineers.


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