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Class desk 955 Posted 7 years ago
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Just children’s simple writing, thanks!

My bad habit is that I give up easily when I’m in hard times.

I chose my motto today.

It is “Look for the silver lining when skies are gray.”

It is important for me to look on the bright side when everything is tough.

So I will try to be positive every time I feel like giving up.


My bad habit is not to be punctual.

I chose my motto today.

It is “Time is Money”

It is important for me to be punctual.

So I will be punctual.

Also, I will keep my promises well.

  

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class desk 955 when I’m in hard times Not natural. Maybe "when times are hard". class desk 955 My bad habit is not to be punctual.

  • class desk 955 when I’m in hard times Not natural.
  • Maybe "when times are hard".
  • class desk 955 My bad habit is not to be punctual.
  • That "not" is in a bad place.
  • " Those are the only two problems I see.
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class desk 955when I’m in hard times

Not natural. Maybe "when times are hard".

class desk 955My bad habit is not to be punctual.

That "not" is in a bad place. Try "My bad habit is to be unpunctual."

Those are the only two problems I see.

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