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Abdelaziz Buafra Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Just check it if my letter looking fine and without mistake

You have been accepted onto a university course abroad and you are writing to the university to ask for information about the accommodation, Write a letter to the accommodation officer in which you should:

  • introduce yourself
  • say what kind of place you would like to live in
  • request more information about the accommodation
just read my letter if it is looking fine and no mistake please

Dear Sir,



I hope your fine. I will write this letter to introducing myself and will say in which kind of place i would like to live in. My name is Abdelaziz and I'm (age) years old. I was born in (city). I live in villa with my family and we are small family. I am so happy and I would to thank you for accepting me into this university abroad my country because when i was child my dream was to complete my study overseas of my country, So I learn English language faster and communicates by English with friends.



Sometimes I felt bored while I stay alone, I am not used to live without my family, In same time, I would like to study far of my real family because I really want study well and if it is sharing from me to choice, I would like to stay/live with host family to take care of me like as my family when they take care of me, I would to feel like I'm live my real family, but without have any child and keep me in suite room with en suite, So in this way I will be more comfortable than in university dorms because they may annoying me while I study or sleep.



Further, I would like to see where the University located and some photos of university classrooms/halls, Also the restaurant if you don’t mind just send me link of university photographs.

I look forward to hearing from you if you don’t mind please.

Your faithfully,

Abdelaziz Buafra

  

Top answer

Hi Abdelaziz, Perhaps your teacher wants you to write a very detailed and personal letter like this. In Canada, we wouldn't do this. You'll be surprised at how short it is.

  • Hi Abdelaziz, Perhaps your teacher wants you to write a very detailed and personal letter like this.
  • In Canada, we wouldn't do this.
  • You'll be surprised at how short it is.
  • Dear Sir or Madam, I have been accepted ino your BA program, starting 1 November this year.
  • My student ID is ABC1234.
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Hi Abdelaziz,

Perhaps your teacher wants you to write a very detailed and personal letter like this.

In Canada, we wouldn't do this.

Let me show you a Canadian example.You'll be surprised at how short it is.

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