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Natalia09 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Just as
Dear all,
I would like to know whether this sentence is grammatically correct.
The newly created website with responsive design is just as diversified, as equipment manufactured by the company at its factories in Konin is versatile.
Thank you.
I would like to know whether this sentence is grammatically correct.
The newly created website with responsive design is just as diversified, as equipment manufactured by the company at its factories in Konin is versatile.
Thank you.
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The comma is incorrect and should be deleted. The sentence is otherwise grammatical, but I'm not convinced that "diversified" is quite the right word or that this "diversified / versatile" comparison works well.
- The comma is incorrect and should be deleted.
- The sentence is otherwise grammatical, but I'm not convinced that "diversified" is quite the right word or that this "diversified / versatile" comparison works well.
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The comma is incorrect and should be deleted. The sentence is otherwise grammatical, but I'm not convinced that "diversified" is quite the right word or that this "diversified / versatile" comparison works well.
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Hi GPY, thanks for the reply. I think "multifaceted" would sound better than "versatile"
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