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Angliholic Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Journey of Love
When a gust of wind blows me like a floating cloud, being lonely, I have no choice but to go travel, carrying my beloved guitar and a yellow aster.
I want to go far far away to an unknown place. I want to walk for a long long distance to retrieve my dream of the past.
I pretend I don’t love you any more so that I can go travelling, carrying a sincere heart and a red rose.
Hi,
The above is a Chinese song popular dozens of years ago. I love it very much, and I tried to translate it into English in the above. Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.
I want to go far far away to an unknown place. I want to walk for a long long distance to retrieve my dream of the past.
I pretend I don’t love you any more so that I can go travelling, carrying a sincere heart and a red rose.
Hi,
The above is a Chinese song popular dozens of years ago. I love it very much, and I tried to translate it into English in the above. Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.
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Well, I don't know the Chinese, of course, so I can't check the translation, and I presume that you do not wish to retain the meter (since your English version has none), but I can fix the grammar/vocabulary choice: When a gust of wind blows me like a floating cloud , lonely, I have no choice but to travel, carrying my beloved guitar and a yellow aster. I want to go far , far away to an unknown place. I want to walk for a long, long distance to retrieve my dream from the past.
- Well, I don't know the Chinese, of course, so I can't check the translation, and I presume that you do not wish to retain the meter (since your English version has none), but I can fix the grammar/vocabulary choice: When a gust of wind blows me like a floating cloud , lonely, I have no choice but to travel, carrying my beloved guitar and a yellow aster.
- I want to go far , far away to an unknown place.
- I want to walk for a long, long distance to retrieve my dream from the past.
- I pretend I don’t love you any more so that I can go travelling, carrying an innocent heart and a red rose.
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Well, I don't know the Chinese, of course, so I can't check the translation, and I presume that you do not wish to retain the meter (since your English version has none), but I can fix the grammar/vocabulary choice:
When a gust of wind blows me like a floating cloud, lonely, I have no choice but to travel, carrying my beloved guitar and a yellow aster.
When a gust of wind blows me like a floating cloud, lonely, I have no choice but to travel, carrying my beloved guitar and a yellow aster.
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