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Oviram layak Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Joining
'His joining the party was more for the charismatic leader than for the ideology itself.
Is the sentence correct?
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I would probably change it to "more because of its charismatic leader", but otherwise it is OK.
- I would probably change it to "more because of its charismatic leader", but otherwise it is OK.
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I would probably change it to "more because of its charismatic leader", but otherwise it is OK.
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