0Thankfully, the public is being brought to attention about the dangers of smoking. Every May 31, 01b00you can join in on World No Tobacco Day02b00 and take action against smoking.02br 02br 00Hi,02br 02br 00Does the bolded part in the above sound right? Does it mean "you can join in (some events/campaigns) on World No Tobacco Day? Thanks.0-
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0The original sentence is fine. However, you could incorporate what you have in parentheses in the sentence to make it stronger.02br 02br 00[You can join in the events and campaigns to take action against smoking...]0-