0
Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

John caught up this and succeed at asking a lovely girl out for dinner

My student wrote:

It's quite popular to make friends on the Net these times. John caught up this and succeed at asking a lovely girl out for dinner.

My suggetion:

It's quite popular to make friends on the Internet these days. John made use of/seized/cashed in on this chance and succeeded in asking a lovely girl out for dinner.

Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.
  

Top answer

Hi, My suggestion: Making friends on the Internet is quite common these days . John tried this and succeeded in asking a lovely girl out for dinner. Best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, My suggestion: Making friends on the Internet is quite common these days .
  • John tried this and succeeded in asking a lovely girl out for dinner.
  • Best wishes, Clive
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Hi,

My suggestion:

Making friends on the Internet is quite common these days. John tried this and succeeded in asking a lovely girl out for dinner.

Best wishes, Clive
0

Related Questions