[JOB&WORK] Some people believe that luck is the most important factor in one’s success. Do you agree or disagree?

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In our current competitive world, although everyone seeks success, only few people achieve it. Some people believe that luck is the most important factor in their success. According to me, I completely disagree with above comment because success is contributed by many components which are more significant than luck. The reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point of view.

To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that success would not come to you without working hard. Although some individuals are born to wealthy parents without financial burden, they exploit money in wrong way and then they are susceptible to social evils. Moreover, there are many cases that people who possess god-gifted talents without spending time practicing are not prosperous. Further emphasizing my point of view, it is said that “No pain no gain”, therefore the old prove that happiness and success do not reach us in default of hard working.

In addition, people’s success depends on how big their passion to get what they want, not relating to fortune. Cristiono Ronaldo is a typical example of desire. Thank to his football aspiration, he could struggle with many challenges to become one of the greatest soccer players of all time. Ultimately, passion is driving force behind success and happiness that allow us all to live better.

In conclusion, working hard and passion are two main contributing elements to lead people to success in their lives, and luck is only catalyst to attain the goal quickly. Hence, everyone should believe in their karma and deed, not in luck.