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Barretogina Posted 20 years ago
Business & Finance
Job letter from Gina Barreto
Please, I am not sure about the gramma here. Please, could you check that?
Dear Human Resources Manager,
If you are seeking a public relations strategist who can deliver bottom-line results, I'd like to make a case for myself.
I am a public relations professional specialising in corporate, commercial and social impact interests with more than 10 years of career experience. I have worked in situations in which business image plays a key role in the attainment of the company’s goals.
In an intensive job experience, I worked as a Communications Assistant Director for one of the top-telecommunications companies in Colombia, ETB. After six years, my rol played a deffinitive contribution in the image transformation of this commpany.
My passion is strategic thinking and my personal goal is to be one of the best consultant in public relations field. I am looking for a challening scenary and offer there my talent to design and implement solid communication strategies that complement concurrent corporate, public and internal interests.
After a sabbatical year in New Zealand, I am working temporaly as a PR Consultant in Colombia. Now, I am excited by the challenge of using my experience internationaly. And off course, I want to reach the highest level than my ability will take me to and have the opportunity to offer my know how, creativity and desire to make a difference.
I am particularly interested in positions in the New York City area in the following industries: Advert/media/marketing, consulting & corporate strategy, telecommunications, hospitality & tourism, heathcare & medical.
I'd like to meet with you to discuss adding value to one of your accounts as I've done for my previous employers. If you need to reach me, feel free to contact me via email (REMOVED BY MOD) or via phone (REMOVED BY MOD)
I am going to New York and I will be available for meetings on 26-31 December, 2005 and on 2-7 January, 2006. My mobile there is (REMOVED BY MOD) I look forward to our contact .
Thanking you most sincerely for your time and consideration.
Enthusiastically,
Dear Human Resources Manager,
If you are seeking a public relations strategist who can deliver bottom-line results, I'd like to make a case for myself.
I am a public relations professional specialising in corporate, commercial and social impact interests with more than 10 years of career experience. I have worked in situations in which business image plays a key role in the attainment of the company’s goals.
In an intensive job experience, I worked as a Communications Assistant Director for one of the top-telecommunications companies in Colombia, ETB. After six years, my rol played a deffinitive contribution in the image transformation of this commpany.
My passion is strategic thinking and my personal goal is to be one of the best consultant in public relations field. I am looking for a challening scenary and offer there my talent to design and implement solid communication strategies that complement concurrent corporate, public and internal interests.
After a sabbatical year in New Zealand, I am working temporaly as a PR Consultant in Colombia. Now, I am excited by the challenge of using my experience internationaly. And off course, I want to reach the highest level than my ability will take me to and have the opportunity to offer my know how, creativity and desire to make a difference.
I am particularly interested in positions in the New York City area in the following industries: Advert/media/marketing, consulting & corporate strategy, telecommunications, hospitality & tourism, heathcare & medical.
I'd like to meet with you to discuss adding value to one of your accounts as I've done for my previous employers. If you need to reach me, feel free to contact me via email (REMOVED BY MOD) or via phone (REMOVED BY MOD)
I am going to New York and I will be available for meetings on 26-31 December, 2005 and on 2-7 January, 2006. My mobile there is (REMOVED BY MOD) I look forward to our contact .
Thanking you most sincerely for your time and consideration.
Enthusiastically,
Top answer
Hmmmm. Excellent writing skills are an integral part of PR and your letter does not really demonstrate a high enough proficiency in English (sorry to sound harsh). Is there some way you can work to perfect your English before applying; I think for this sort of work you really need to equal native level to be able to compete with other jobseekers in what is an immensely popular type of work.
- Hmmmm.
- Excellent writing skills are an integral part of PR and your letter does not really demonstrate a high enough proficiency in English (sorry to sound harsh).
- Is there some way you can work to perfect your English before applying; I think for this sort of work you really need to equal native level to be able to compete with other jobseekers in what is an immensely popular type of work.
- But anyway, check your spellings; there are many errors.
- Any PR/marketing/advertising agency will chuck out your application for these.
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Hmmmm.
Excellent writing skills are an integral part of PR and your letter does not really demonstrate a high enough proficiency in English (sorry to sound harsh). Is there some way you can work to perfect your English before applying; I think for this sort of work you really need to equal native level to be able to compete with other jobseekers in what is an immensely popular type of wor
Excellent writing skills are an integral part of PR and your letter does not really demonstrate a high enough proficiency in English (sorry to sound harsh). Is there some way you can work to perfect your English before applying; I think for this sort of work you really need to equal native level to be able to compete with other jobseekers in what is an immensely popular type of wor
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