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Silak12 Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing

Job Letter.

Hi! everyone.
Could you proofread the letter(incomplete) below? I would be much obliged.
I would like to know whether the letter is appropriate so far.
Secretary Aviation & Chairman CAA Board
RE: Application for Assistant Director Vigilance position
Dear Sir,
I would like to apply for the post of Assistant Director Vigilance as I fully meet the criteria for the post.
I am 24 years of age and recently finished my master’s in Business Administration securing second division. Not only am I eligible for the job, but also I have always had a keen fascination for the job(Vigilance) that my father served in and was very interested to see it being advertised. I consider myself to be a quick learner, open-minded and responsible. With my watchful attention to detail and critical eye I can supplement the CAA’s preventive armor.
My educational history is as follows:
Xyz
Thanks!
  

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Could someone assist me? I am in dire need of help.
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That letter is mostly waffle. When is the application deadline?
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teechrWhen is the application deadline?
It's 18 January 2017.
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Then you should have enough time to write a more meaningful and convincing letter. Talk about your qualifications, achievements, as well as your practical experience, but especially about how those might fit the job you're applying for. Be concise, specific and to the point.
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teechrThen you should have enough time to write a more meaningful and convincing letter. Talk about your qualifications, achievements, as well as your practical experience, but especially about how those might fit the job you're applying for. Be concise, specific and to the point.
Thanks! Sir I will try my best.
But could you point out any grammatical mist
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silak12 But could you point out any grammatical mistakes in the above?
I would like to apply for the post of Assistant Director-- Vigilance as I fully meet the criteria for the post.
I am 24 years of age and recently finished my master’s in Business Administration securing second division. Not only am I eligible for the job, but also I
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