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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
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Please help me out to correct my grammar mistakes.
ARE YOU A TEAM PLAYER?
Yes I am, in fact I was also part of the Installation Projects right before I started my role as full time Architect for WorkForce LLC where we were all worked well together as a team and completed some important installations projects for Business Offices that lasted for about 3 Months of physical work. It was fun working with others came from different fields from I.T's, CSR's and Network Engineers who shared the same common goals and it helped us built a rapport within the organization as well.
ARE YOU A TEAM PLAYER?
Yes I am, in fact I was also part of the Installation Projects right before I started my role as full time Architect for WorkForce LLC where we were all worked well together as a team and completed some important installations projects for Business Offices that lasted for about 3 Months of physical work. It was fun working with others came from different fields from I.T's, CSR's and Network Engineers who shared the same common goals and it helped us built a rapport within the organization as well.
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The first sentence is extremely long. You should add some full stops/commas. This "full-time" goes with hyphen.
- The first sentence is extremely long.
- You should add some full stops/commas.
- This "full-time" goes with hyphen.
- working with others coming from...
- it helped us build ...
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The first sentence is extremely long. You should add some full stops/commas.
This "full-time" goes with hyphen.
...working with others coming from...
...it helped us build...
This "full-time" goes with hyphen.
...working with others coming from...
...it helped us build...
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