22 April 2013 or 22th April 2013 ______________________________________
Dear Hiring Manager,
RE: Database Administrator (reference: NAIT4949)
I am writing to apply for the database administrator position advertised on the fish4.co.uk on 28th March (28/03/2013). I enclose my CV for your consideration.
As you will see from my CV I have a lot of experience working with Oracle and SQL Server database. Last year I was responsible for reorganization of the entire database at the London Academy of IT. I stayed in this job until December 2012.
Last three months I worked in a team for the German research company that provides services for many large companies worldwide. Furthermore, I am organize and reliable and I believe that my strong technical experience will make me a very competitive candidate for this position.
Now I feel ready for more responsibility and more challenging work. I hope my application is successful. I would welcome the opportunity to continue my career in a university that have such a good reputation and it is so dynamic and ambitious.
Please feel free to contact me an any tame to arrange an interview with me. I can be reached via e-mail at *****.***********@yahoo.com or my cell phone, ***-***-****.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
****** ********* ******** *********
Top answer
uk on 28th March" - either on the ... website , or no "the". And be consistent with style of dates.
— Anonymous
uk on 28th March" - either on the ...
website , or no "the".
And be consistent with style of dates.
3) "Oracle and SQL Server database" - Is it only 1 database?
4) "responsible for reorganization of the entire database" - either responsible for the reorganization of...
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Some comments: 1) Date at top: either style is OK but I prefer 22nd April (not 22th!) 2) "on the fish4.co.uk on 28th March" - either on the ... website, or no "the". And be consistent with style of dates. 3) "Oracle and SQL Server database" - Is it only 1 database? 4) "responsible for reorganization of the entire database" - either responsib