job application corrections

Hello~
could someone please correct the following for me(grammar and punctuation)? it's not long : ) thanks in advance

I would like to take up this opportunity to work as part of a team of a prestigious XXX at XXX(name), to enhance my abilities in the retail industry through gaining more experience in customer service skills, retail sales skills and many more. As I am currently a XXX student, being able to work at XXX(name) allows me to be able to recognise high end XXX and international brands.